Diving paragraph

The Diver balanced so well that she was like a statue on the 15 metre diving board. She had to concentrate. Otherwise she might lose the finals. Then when the stadium was filled to the brim with anticipation. She jumped. The crowd went wild while she triple somersaulted and twisted twice, then perfectly landed vertically on a 90 degree angle. The judges hold up 3 sheets with 10 on it. She knows instantly that she has won the final. She goes up to receive her medal. Not the silver, nor the bronze, the gold.