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Tuesday 15 April 2014

Show not tell setting


Huddled in my triple layer blanket on my mattress the moonlight is shining the through the windows where the snow on the window ledge hasn’t risen up to yet. The moon makes a square shaped glow on the wall. I look under the door and I see the hall light on. It is shining right through. My eyes begin to droop.

Darkness....

The chirping of birds outside in the big tree awakens me from my slumber. I open my eyes and the sun is shining, melting the snow. I smell bacon and eggs. I quickly get dressed, run down to the kitchen and start to eat. I eat like a pig.

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